After two years and a nearly complete rewrite from where I thought the book was going to go... it's almost finished. Now if my family can just keep their acts together for a few more weeks, I'll be able to ship this off to the publisher and start counting the days until the December release party!
In the meantime...
Here's another scene from the book not previously shared....
Shea saw Kae
arrive late to the courtroom, swimming to her usual seat without even a glance
around the amphitheater to find him. From his higher position in the
grandstands, he watched as she clenched and unclenched her small hands, her
silky blonde shining like gold in the morning light, her attention focused on
the proceedings. A sad longing filled him, and he wished he sat next to her to
calm her obvious anxiety.
Shea wondered what
made her late. His stomach twisted into a tight knot as he pictured her with
him. With Zan. Despite her protests, Shea knew their breakup had something to
do with the sorcerer.
Maybe he’d go
visit the guy in the dungeon after all. Was it fair to punch someone if they
were already imprisoned?
When the court
broke for a lunch recess, he followed the chattering gaggle of princesses
toward the exit, still stuck in his own thoughts and paying no attention to their
conversation. Prince Azul’s sister Layla kept trying to include him by asking
questions, but Shea was distracted, wondering if he’d be allowed to visit Zan
in the dungeon, and whether the sorcerer would tell him the truth of what was
going on.
A hard tug on his
arm caught his attention, but instead of Layla it was Kae swimming next to him.
She leaned close, her blonde hair caressing the side of his neck as she
whispered. “I can’t believe that sea snake got away with another murder. What
did I miss at the beginning of the court session?”
Shea closed his
eyes, savoring the feel of her breath tickling against his ear. Had he imagined
the scene in the library? Had she changed her mind about breaking up? His hand
found hers and twined their fingers for a second before she yanked her hand
free as if he’d stung her, putting more distance between them.
A ball of ice
formed in the pit of Shea’s stomach, his throat thick with a sudden rush of
emotion. “I thought we were still friends.”
“We are. I mean…”
“I get it.” His
jaw clenched. Everything he wanted to say to her jumbled in his head, a
mishmash of jealous feelings about Zan and a longing to go back to when it was
just the two of them alone, walking the beach at Windmill Point. Before all the
complications of Atlantis and royalty and sorcerers wedged them apart.
The Pacific
mermaids took notice of Kae, giggling behind their hands. Layla pressed close
to Shea’s other side, wrapping long fingers around his bicep and giving Kae a
dismissive smile. “What are you still
doing hanging around the prince? Go away, little mermaid. You had your chance.
The prince is moving on to better things now.”
He saw the shock
and hurt wash across her face, quickly replaced by something else. Anger.
“Not wasting any
time, are you, Layla?” Her eyes flashed at the blue-haired mermaid as the water
around them warmed. “I hope by better
things you’re not referring to yourself. You’ve already kissed half the
merman in our class, and the first term is far from over.”
“If you haven’t
even kissed poor Shea yet, no wonder he dumped you.”
“For the record, I
broke up with him!”
Layla’s musical
laughter sounded overly loud and drew curious stares from other students in the
crowd, like a siren drawing her prey. “Why in Neptune’s name would you make up
such a ridiculous tale?”
Kae’s hands balled
into fists at her sides, her tail fin swishing a fast beat. Shea felt the low
hum of magick vibrating the water. “Because it’s true.”
“Then you’re more
the fool than I imagined,” Layla purred, running one finger up and down his
bare arm, sending a zing of magick along his skin, magick that urged him to
stay at her side. His eyes flew wide as he fought against her compulsion spell and
slowly backed away.
Layla didn’t take notice,
her complete focus now on Kae. “You’re a stupid serving wench. If the prince
was my boyfriend, I’d never leave his side. And he’d never want me to go.”
Shea felt trapped,
unable to form a coherent thought, let alone sentence, as the two traded increasingly
barbed insults. A crowd of their classmates quickly gathered, goading the
mermaids on. Several of Kae’s friends darted to her side to denigrate the loose
morality of the royal lifestyle, while the rest of the princesses surrounded
Layla to jeer at the “plebian class.” The sizzle of magick swirled through the
crowd, and he realized each of the mermaids wore transmutare stones and didn’t seem afraid to turn the magick
against their fellow classmates.
He found himself
pushed further and further from the center of the fight as professors elbowed
forward to break up the argument. The crackle of magick dissipated, washed away
with the current as if he’d imagined it.
He realized this
fight was not about him, not really, but more of a royals versus non-royals,
the haves and have-nots. Shea flashed back to similar arguments back at his
school in Oklahoma. How the rich townie kids made a sport of teasing Shea and
his farmer friends. The ugly words here in Atlantis sounded the same, the only
difference the undercurrent of magick in the water.
None of this had
mattered on Cape Cod. As far as he could tell, his mother and Kae’s mother were
best friends, despite their class differences. Why was it such an issue here in
Atlantis? And how had he been so oblivious to it until now?
He swam out into
the courtyard, passing the Doric columns at the entrance to his dormitory. He
waved to a few mermen who called out to him but didn’t slow. He needed to find
answers.
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